求一段英文自我介绍。（50分）（拒绝翻译机）

Good morning, teachers. Here is my self-introduction.I am XXX and my english name is Bella. I am a twelve-year-old girl comes from XX. I love cultures of China and Korea, also i can speak a little Korean. My hobbies are singing, dancing, playing computer games（玩电脑游戏，如果想说「上网」的话，可以说「surfing the Internet」) and speaking Korean. Besides（而且/另外的意思), I am good at sprinting.(我擅於短跑。或者可以说「sprinting is my expertise」) I once have been a committee of sports,a discipline inspector and also a group leader at school. I get on well with my classmates.(我和同学相处很好) I get on well with my parents too. Although there are some quarrels sometimes(虽然偶尔会吵架), I always tell some jokes and make them happy. I have a happy family, also I have my beloved(或者 dearest) parents who love me, and have teachers and friends who take care of me. This is the end of my introduction. Thank you!

面试英语自我介绍求改。

面试英文一定要条理清晰，目的性强，开门见山，礼貌得体。 Good morning/Good afternoon, Sir and (or) Madam. Thank you for giving me such a great opportunity to introduce myself to you. My name is XXX, and I am 18 years old. Now I am a senior student at XX No. X High School.(是否可以这样讲,会好一点：I am going to graduate from XX No. X High School in a couple of months?) （你想干嘛，要开门见山）I am very interested in the position (or XX chance) provided by your company and I believe my personality and qualifications pretty match the requirements. (你为什么适合这个位置或机会，要一点一点讲，每一点的第一句要先总括一下，让面试官先有个印象）First of all, I am a self-motivated person, and enjoy working in computer world. I love computer games and such kind of passion could be traced back even from my childhood. However, having realized that most of games are just for entertainment, I dreamed of a game which could be called the ninth art. In order to realize it, I devoted myself into studying programming in senior school, and got the first prize in NOIP2008. I know, it requirs a wealth of knowledge and technique, so I studied hard and read many books. I believe, through my continuous hard work, some day my dream will came true. Sencondly, ......(你要想说服面试官，除了上述优点，还能找出一个吗？比如讲你如何努力学习英语，如果没有，就将上一段的first of all去掉) (既然是面试，在最后一定要点出你这次自我介绍的目的)I have keen desire to be part of your company (or your team), I'm sure I will make positive contribution through my hard work. That's all. Thank you for your time. 我也曾面试过很多人，希望能帮到你。